Not recommended8 hrs played
This story has very simplistic writing, which can be a pro or a con depending on what you're looking for in your reading. However, the bigger problem is that there's no charm in the storytelling. I've read many fics that weren't skillfully written but were still compelling because of other things like vivid imagery, and endearing characterizations. Those are some things this story is severely lacking in. I'll detail...
28 found this helpful, 2020-10-11
Recommended5 hrs played
First, I'll start by saying, Yes I would recommend this to those who enjoy these sorts of games. Mind you there's some things that need work and attention paid to by the writer, but nothing that will ruin the experience for the reader.
Now then on to the bits and pieces of my review, as it were. The story is interesting, with a some what strange beginning to it that slowly morphs into a more interesting read. Its...
5 found this helpful, 2020-10-10
Not recommended10 hrs played
The story is rather rushed and somewhat poorly written. Sorry, Author.
8 found this helpful, 2020-10-11